tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post3615226464010478256..comments2023-08-22T07:40:54.069-07:00Comments on Heart's A Mess: Heart's A Mess- Chapter Nine Part 1. Sasakhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12196460187822557170noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-17695422864589068402023-02-04T06:39:57.459-08:002023-02-04T06:39:57.459-08:00Loving every bit of this story.Loving every bit of this story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-43804169218699627342022-01-27T05:28:51.768-08:002022-01-27T05:28:51.768-08:00Came across this today and so far it's just ge...Came across this today and so far it's just getting better Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17452937528405513177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-50266339515999486562017-12-03T14:33:26.709-08:002017-12-03T14:33:26.709-08:00Oh no that's was a bad accident. Bad accident....Oh no that's was a bad accident. Bad accident.<br /><br />She freaked out, I will be too<br />Aaok<br />Foxtailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09427972766695041512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-13429299070418838292013-09-26T08:33:18.575-07:002013-09-26T08:33:18.575-07:00Nice update dear!!!anjali and Arnav' conversat...Nice update dear!!!anjali and Arnav' conversation was really cute especially dukhi khushi..lol..premdewaanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11895376152878111913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-2400589324041228502013-07-28T15:23:31.024-07:002013-07-28T15:23:31.024-07:00Anjali and arnav's phone conversation was supe...Anjali and arnav's phone conversation was super cute . Though khushi's reaction was comical. Her explanation for her reaction was just heart wrenching and so realistic. Just an awesome and cute update.Malznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-25992411476813205882013-06-08T16:34:02.673-07:002013-06-08T16:34:02.673-07:00OMG she elbowed him ROFL !! Here is me thinking th...OMG she elbowed him ROFL !! Here is me thinking there would be some RAbbaVe!! The joke is on me. Anyway I just started reading the story and did not make any comments coz I could not stop to make any ! But its very well written, clean and concise and it BEAUTIFUL !! There is a reversal where Khushi is the tough nut to crack whereas Arnav seems to be easy going one. Loved the fact he waited for her shift get over and how you described the all the scenes till now. Kudos you have a way with words keep it up !!! Muah !!Rihahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13803024146933839577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-79489459255787113062013-06-05T17:13:04.270-07:002013-06-05T17:13:04.270-07:00"If anything Khushi was honest to a fault. It..."If anything Khushi was honest to a fault. It did not take her long to determine that her mind and heart were at odds. This man had managed to turn her very organised and compartmentalised life upside down in a matter of days. Gone was the cynical and cautious Dr. Gupta. In her place was a woman she barely recognised. The chemistry she could quantify, after all physical compatability was no knew phenomena. What terrified her was how she could abandon all her self imposed shackles and allow him to live her secret dreams despite knowing that it would most likely end in heartache..."<br /><br />These self analysis you put your characters through is soo freaking refreshing. It's gives us a breather from the story and think it through from the character's view and we are always aligned in how we look at the situation. A woman so confident in her abilities to administer an extensive cardiac surgery is going to slowly but steadily learn how to lose yourself to a man who wants nothing but her and her heart. AllSmiles86https://www.blogger.com/profile/10512544195917545051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-16174176660013619532013-03-29T01:45:05.113-07:002013-03-29T01:45:05.113-07:00hi dear,
i just came across you story and started ...hi dear,<br />i just came across you story and started reading....and could stop myself without finishing. <br />you are one hell of a writer..!! i just read the whole thing in one go...and now i am dying for more. i absolutely love your storyline...utterly unique and innovative. i never read anything as such. i love this (ur) strong self-built khushi. and arnav is such a darling...!<br /><br />continue soon.!<br /><br />ps. very new, very very refreshing. <br /><br />lots of love,<br />tanvi.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-14133175828539393782013-03-21T12:20:48.903-07:002013-03-21T12:20:48.903-07:00Hiya!!
i read all ur chaps in one go!! and i am ...Hiya!! <br /><br />i read all ur chaps in one go!! and i am extremely drawn to it... <br />I loved the Gupta you created .. a doc .. and the raizada .. well no questions there!! <br /><br />But whats with the new gained knowledge? Arnav - Anjali - knows khushi already?<br />and whats the past with Anjali?<br /><br />well i know i know i shall be answered abt them all in the chaps to come..<br />i shall only wait and enjoy the read!!<br /><br />I really loved the fast paced moved of the story in your FF.. without much of unnccesary dragging to do... its quite snappy and much to my liking !! <br /><br />I see this FF has not been updated for a good amgt of time... <br /><br />i only hope you continue to update! and update quick!! <br /><br />Thanks for sharing this!! <br /><br />~Leena<br />IF ID LeenaRocks<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01489226032331731316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-13194607995569240912013-03-08T02:11:57.181-08:002013-03-08T02:11:57.181-08:00just read both Ch 8 and 9 and boy do i love your w...just read both Ch 8 and 9 and boy do i love your writing or what?! absolutely amazing conversation between arnav and anjali and her caution to him....Khushi Khushi and not dukhi Khushi!! the story is flowing really really well.... though now that you have got khushi to talk.... please carry it forward. hopefully we will hear arnav's story as well, soon! overall a very very cute update! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-15451860501368173962013-03-07T05:49:22.361-08:002013-03-07T05:49:22.361-08:00there is a reason that i am not a writer and its h...there is a reason that i am not a writer and its has nothing to do with lack of ideas but only with lack of efforts. the amount of efforts u put in your work is commendable and i just love you for this.<br />its very rare to see a sister asking her brother to take things carefully with a girl because she wants tht girl in his life. usually sisters believe their brothers to be god gift to women, so i really liked this anjali. i want to know why she became a doctor.<br />such a homely scene. all i can manage to say is it was super cute.Amiarismenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-45296959404657496172013-03-04T13:53:29.094-08:002013-03-04T13:53:29.094-08:00arnav n anjali's conversation was very moving....arnav n anjali's conversation was very moving... I love how arnav is slowly starting to figure out why khushi is the way she is. ... im really curious about anjali... What is she suffering from. ..?<br />plz can u send me the link for skyfall... Would love to read itaddicted87https://www.blogger.com/profile/00514109754044380184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-2773413265361524612013-03-03T11:01:42.824-08:002013-03-03T11:01:42.824-08:00Shucks! It's avantika_2012. Lol! :-P Sorry!Shucks! It's avantika_2012. Lol! :-P Sorry! Avantikanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-58519916548602866942013-03-03T10:58:45.405-08:002013-03-03T10:58:45.405-08:00Hey! I just came across this blog....got the link ...Hey! I just came across this blog....got the link through Krani's blog. <br /><br />I have to congratulate you. It's a wonderful story so far. I love how you're shaping your characters. Keep up the good work! :-)<br /><br /><br />My IF ID is avantika_2013. May I know yours too?Avantikanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-84296307686953207662013-03-03T09:14:34.817-08:002013-03-03T09:14:34.817-08:00I m loving this FF !! :-)
Disha I m loving this FF !! :-)<br /><br />Disha Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-53107313097091679782013-03-02T12:12:29.605-08:002013-03-02T12:12:29.605-08:00I loved Anjali and Arnav's convo esp when she ...I loved Anjali and Arnav's convo esp when she scolds him. So sweet. All your characters are so nice, I like every single one so far! <br />Poor Arnav! You're not gonna complicate his nasal problem are you? :P I can't imagine an Arnav with a DNS :P<br /><br />I want to say update soon, but i don't read soon, so i'm gonna curb my eagerness and be have nice :P<br /><br />~nify-niaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-4463084395391895972013-03-01T14:02:07.972-08:002013-03-01T14:02:07.972-08:00Hi just started to read your ff. Wonderful story! ...Hi just started to read your ff. Wonderful story! I love Arnavs and khushis character here. Poor Arnav, but that part was hilarious and I love the why he call her women! Keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter. <br /><br />LathaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11414503610802432057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-51998543544539359172013-03-01T12:57:37.931-08:002013-03-01T12:57:37.931-08:00Harry Potter was a really nice choice :D
poor Arna...Harry Potter was a really nice choice :D<br />poor Arnav.............but still it was a hilarious moment.........i couldnt stop laughing<br />the comfort they share in each others company is really nice<br /><br />GunM(IF)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-49280398400837145362013-03-01T04:53:41.876-08:002013-03-01T04:53:41.876-08:00Well, before you think that I am flattering you I ...Well, before you think that I am flattering you I would like to clarify that I am not. I don't know why you think so but in no way I think that chapters you've written so far for HAM are sub-standard. Hey lady! I know that this is your baby and can say whatever you want about it but don't forget that I am her fan and you know that fans sometimes may be crazy, right?<br />I hope I haven't frightened you???<br /><br />BTW, I am loving the way the story is shaping. The best part was Arnav reading Harry potter...Well, you know I hate people who hate Harry Potter. I know everybody have their preferences but who hates Harry Potter and there's nothing girly about it. In fact I wouldn't marry someone who doésn't like it. I know I am bit crazy. Getting back to the chapter I loved every bit and pieces about it. I know Arnav got punched but he also got tending from khushi, he got a kiss and most importantly he got to know bit about her past. Since, they came bit closer, it was all worth it.....<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12833035640806532310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-48139386969680096412013-03-01T01:20:02.086-08:002013-03-01T01:20:02.086-08:00superbbbbbbbbbbbbbsuperbbbbbbbbbbbbbAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17290481115815281503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-53973664061253030402013-02-28T16:43:46.231-08:002013-02-28T16:43:46.231-08:00Sasak this is really good stuff! N I mean it!
Man...Sasak this is really good stuff! N I mean it!<br /><br />Man what attention to details! Sweet man!<br />And then how Di and Arnav conversed it showed how hurt still prevails yet they live life over looking all that!<br /><br />And then khushi sleeping n realizing he got her upstairs n adjusting to the fact he is sleeping peacefully and she has to live with it! How she tried to put him before her!<br /><br />And his choice of book shows the connectivity!! And that unintentional seducing lol that was fun!<br /><br />N her blow man what power! Lol reflex was fast but poor Arnavs nose!<br /><br />Her confession to him and his understanding really really sweet!<br /><br />How can I forget her kiss and her way of treating his fractured nose! Fish you was fun lol I know how much u want to lol guts lady!!<br /><br /><br />CheersTwilightstar_JPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09798946762139392150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-67583932128280360952013-02-28T16:30:57.891-08:002013-02-28T16:30:57.891-08:00Read the story in one go..
Very beautifully penned...Read the story in one go..<br />Very beautifully penned <br /><br />RanjaniAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-16004115034338640262013-02-28T11:23:51.285-08:002013-02-28T11:23:51.285-08:00Loved the way he took care of her first and then i...Loved the way he took care of her first and then it was her turn to do so. The conversation with Anjaliwas cute. Loved the way she told him the story of her life after having broken his nose. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632476399442704126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-84838002917306254992013-02-28T08:56:32.248-08:002013-02-28T08:56:32.248-08:00that was soooo sooo cuteee!!!
loveddd ittt...
an...that was soooo sooo cuteee!!!<br /><br />loveddd ittt...<br /><br />and the sibling convo ufff sooo sooo adorableAlways and Forever 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/18094453727439842159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-49704346319219327462013-02-28T08:42:49.429-08:002013-02-28T08:42:49.429-08:00nice update.. khushi's reaction to arnav was j...nice update.. khushi's reaction to arnav was just right.. poor arnav though. <br />i actually hadnt thought abt the relation between harry n khushi, guess i'm not that smart. thanks for explaining..mayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01827346336592540589noreply@blogger.com