tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post6047364342981746354..comments2023-08-22T07:40:54.069-07:00Comments on Heart's A Mess: Chapter SixteenSasakhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12196460187822557170noreply@blogger.comBlogger49125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-61259662950972522612021-12-09T19:16:28.628-08:002021-12-09T19:16:28.628-08:00AwesomeAwesomeSwathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01729582741213052727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-636284147563916212017-12-03T20:25:54.903-08:002017-12-03T20:25:54.903-08:00Beautifully written, she have to see him, I love t...Beautifully written, she have to see him, I love the way you have written this story.please don't let him die<br />AaokFoxtailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09427972766695041512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-4754015219170227362013-09-26T13:48:49.407-07:002013-09-26T13:48:49.407-07:00Beautiful update dear... The heart beat scene was ...Beautiful update dear... The heart beat scene was just out if this world..,premdewaanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11895376152878111913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-8044214360809753942013-07-17T17:49:49.403-07:002013-07-17T17:49:49.403-07:00You have not updated in a while -- hope all is wel...You have not updated in a while -- hope all is well with you?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-29325146679805880702013-06-05T11:21:00.485-07:002013-06-05T11:21:00.485-07:00it was so emotional part how helpless he was in he...it was so emotional part how helpless he was in her love <br />he was so naughty at the same time khushi was so embarrassed at his statement davil he was<br />it was awesome one<br />continue soon aayt IFnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-18515448325981328632013-05-07T11:43:30.081-07:002013-05-07T11:43:30.081-07:00I have no words. Such love. Such heartbreak. I jus...I have no words. Such love. Such heartbreak. I just loved the update.<br /><br />~nifty-nia Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-4147714665408328492013-05-05T23:50:07.698-07:002013-05-05T23:50:07.698-07:00Short but heartbreaking...the emotions are to over...Short but heartbreaking...the emotions are to overhelming for Khushi....she is backing off....she is afraid....my heart is crying for her.<br />Update next part soon.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06445485866425930732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-1617933970248802472013-05-04T17:16:56.764-07:002013-05-04T17:16:56.764-07:00Love your style of writing .... was directed to yo...Love your style of writing .... was directed to your blog recently ... love the story really gripping... read all 16 parts in one day ...can't wait for the next few parts.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-78976358700751674762013-05-03T21:22:49.638-07:002013-05-03T21:22:49.638-07:00Hey why i feel that she is planning to donate her ...Hey why i feel that she is planning to donate her heart to him so shee said those words.....coz her love is not weak which will turn around like this.....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01089691651702342022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-63717059439851972892013-05-03T10:12:40.919-07:002013-05-03T10:12:40.919-07:00Just finished reading the last 8 chapters
I just k...Just finished reading the last 8 chapters<br />I just knew it was Arnav that had heart problems<br />Damn he is dying, please dont make this like Kal Ho Na Ho<br /><br />Why is Khushi turning away from him? he needs her support now<br />They love each other, you do not abandon your loved ones ever!!!!!!<br />seeta_naipshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12340808249241112520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-40329269663169215782013-05-02T14:50:19.095-07:002013-05-02T14:50:19.095-07:00And did I mention again how brilliant your fic is?...And did I mention again how brilliant your fic is? <br /><br />Its amazing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-44039336929915025252013-05-02T14:38:32.086-07:002013-05-02T14:38:32.086-07:00I am speechless...
This story is too amazing..
...I am speechless... <br /><br />This story is too amazing.. <br /><br />I just loved it. I read it one go. <br /><br />And I know that I would be hampering your creativity and after all its your story to tell, but Arnav can't die. <br /><br />He can't die when he is surrounded by 3 amazing cardiologists. No. He just can't. And neither can Khushi. <br /><br />You've made me smile, laugh, cry everything through this one story.<br /><br /><br />I am not requesting you to change the story line.. or you know...trying to ..act as a wet blanket but.. this story deserves a happy ending. <br /><br />Not because its going to be too painful..but only for the sole purpose of Khushi finally finding her happiness. <br /><br />She never really got anyone in her life to love and someone who loved her right as much.. doesn't she deserve once chance at happiness? <br /><br />I know she'll have to struggle to find it.. but I just hope that she does. I fervently hope that she does. <br /><br />I don't know what you mean by giving this story an alternative happy ending.....and for some reason this alternative way doesn't sound like a really happy ending.... but I just know that this story is an amazing piece of work and everyone in the story deserve a happy ending. <br /><br /><br />Not a sad-happy ending..but a happy-happy ending.<br /><br /><br />Am I sounding too desperate for you to give it a happy ending?That's because I cried in the last two updates. Not complaining..just saying that this story is too amazing to have a sad ending. <br /><br />It can't end in Kal Ho Na Ho (movie) style. Just saying. Okay. I think I blabbered enough already. <br /><br />And its just what I feel. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-16814579673420838602013-05-01T00:58:25.162-07:002013-05-01T00:58:25.162-07:00I absolutely love this fic. Love, love, love this ...I absolutely love this fic. Love, love, love this fic so much!Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15665968383452093856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-35999208940324645052013-04-29T23:08:50.869-07:002013-04-29T23:08:50.869-07:00I read this in literally one night! Stayed up and ...I read this in literally one night! Stayed up and ignored my poor husband! Please update soon! I also love love love love your YLME I hope you dont close it and keep it open. Trust all your readers we love you, but sometimes we forget to express our love! BabyLandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10894101441275021173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-18197870884019050412013-04-29T06:23:08.819-07:002013-04-29T06:23:08.819-07:00tough but beautifully written chapter.tough but beautifully written chapter.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859015104716496593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-76279839947317782142013-04-28T23:02:59.742-07:002013-04-28T23:02:59.742-07:00Noooooooo! omg thats so heart breaking! poor khush...Noooooooo! omg thats so heart breaking! poor khushi! she is so broken! and arnav too!but i am glad arnav made it! i am not sure if he can make it up to khushi for what he hid! its kinnda sad how khushi got happiness for little sec and got snatched away! especially if arnav after knowing everything gave it to her just to be snatched away! Bebohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13288885494919405908noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-63827202603324311982013-04-28T11:29:27.537-07:002013-04-28T11:29:27.537-07:00I came across ur ff 2 days back and i'm totall...I came across ur ff 2 days back and i'm totally addicted to it!!!!<br />i have sent u a buddy request on IF <br />pls accept it<br />and pls update:-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-14657168799888142412013-04-28T05:28:51.636-07:002013-04-28T05:28:51.636-07:00this better not be happening - the last line i mea...this better not be happening - the last line i mean! but anyway i have a feeling where u may be taking it. just waiting for u to unveil the next few chapters!!!<br /><br />IF: random94Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-53783814714143636032013-04-27T12:37:06.851-07:002013-04-27T12:37:06.851-07:00Im writing this some hrs after reading chapter 15B...Im writing this some hrs after reading chapter 15B n 16, coz i was not in a position to do anything immediately after i read these two chapters..this is not happening to them please..:(<br />I feel like a masochist write now, knowing how much reading this is making me feel sad n feel the pain, but i just cant give up reading this..!<br /><br />I just wanted to hug Khushi there in the waiting room first. I cant tell u what i felt when i read about Arnav lying on the bed..he actually sort of got out of bed to help her..aahhhh...i love him, i just do..<br />Im waiting to know why khushi did what she did..glimmernglitterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00153289331795326402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-28358825226669780272013-04-27T05:10:52.376-07:002013-04-27T05:10:52.376-07:00Poignant update!
It was short but effective, I had...Poignant update!<br />It was short but effective, I had a lump in my throat after reading this...<br />It's just painful to see them both like this.<br /><br />cupcake1234(IF)cupcake1234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-3742401284605551102013-04-26T22:36:08.763-07:002013-04-26T22:36:08.763-07:00was truly painful ..but why such short update and ...was truly painful ..but why such short update and end why she said that !! too many Q .. plz post the next one soonRuki.Fhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04212825963404622402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-15701425069481098642013-04-26T22:20:32.246-07:002013-04-26T22:20:32.246-07:00a very painful and heart wrenching updt....had tea...a very painful and heart wrenching updt....had tears in my eyes...continue sooon.....<br />ushankitvcAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-51142757202758511732013-04-26T14:15:26.248-07:002013-04-26T14:15:26.248-07:00This was just painful....There is no other way to ...This was just painful....There is no other way to describe it.... and the music though perfect just made me cry even more...<br />update soon pleaseaddicted87https://www.blogger.com/profile/00514109754044380184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-43930851471512780862013-04-26T10:58:33.996-07:002013-04-26T10:58:33.996-07:00so it is arnav then! it ws heartwrenching.... her ...so it is arnav then! it ws heartwrenching.... her feelings felt so touchhable...! and the moment khushi decides to run his heart races,loved it!god... uve rendered me speechless...!<br />my IF name is happypeacePeacenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4622589827574872276.post-4606433603374445642013-04-26T10:25:54.858-07:002013-04-26T10:25:54.858-07:00Oh painfully beautiful! And the music added to it,...Oh painfully beautiful! And the music added to it, it was a heart wrenching Wow experience.<br />I know it's hard for both of them to not see each other. I hope they will face this together, they just have to! They are so connected, he just knew the reason of his fast heart beats! Please, please, please update soon, ab raha nahi jata.<br /><br />shr1234(IF)<br /><br />PS: It's a relief to comnment here but as you told, posting this on IF too!Shrutee27https://www.blogger.com/profile/04436270989417698330noreply@blogger.com